Persuasive Essay on the Dangers of Raw Milk
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I chose to revise this essay from LA 101H because I am very proud of the work that I put into this and I think that the final product is well-crafted and has a strong argument. The topic of this speech - why raw milk should be illegal - is something that I am passionate about and I think it is important to get the message out.
When revising the piece I was sure to avoid generalizing the statements I made in the first draft by qualifying them to make them apply aptly. I also needed to rewrite a few parts to make the word choice make more sense and to ensure that the message was as strong as possible.
